Tuesday, October 17, 2006

Be Her Heart To Thee Laid Far Off Of Farthest Reach? Comments

Rating: 5.0

Is this bottled up TENSION? ...
Doth drink of spirits help he rescue one or more lonesome maidens?

No courage of heart...
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Michael Gale
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Original Unknown Girl 18 October 2006

Michael this is beautifully written. I can feel the tension, the romance... the yearning! It's wonderful! Helen: -) xxx

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 17 October 2006

TH' CUPLET STAVZAS WORK SO WELL, HERE, MICHAEL J.! you said it; TENsion, is right! '''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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Geoff Warden 17 October 2006

Truely did like this write Michael...........well done....

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Michael Gale

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