Saturday, March 9, 2013

Be Happy And Goodbye Comments

Rating: 3.8

I do not need to hear from your lips
That you are happy with someone else.
I just have to look deep into your eyes
And see the light of bliss deep inside.
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diana rose tolentino
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Louis Cecile 07 September 2013

This poem starts well and glows with traditional sentiments. However the ending feels a bit sudden and you could possibly continue or have a stronger conclusion.

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diana rose tolentino

nueva ecija, philippines
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