Sunday, April 28, 2013

Be Happy Comments

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Awake, awake, O my torn fate! Be wise
Why do you fall? Can't you rise?
Hurry up! before the body is buried deep,
Keep thy change that ye must keep.
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 July 2016

Being wise is good always and inviting fate to be in life wisely to give fortune is definitely Interesting. This poem awakes reminding rising of sun in life to overcome the darkest moment. Wonderful sharing definitely....10

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 01 September 2014

Thanks to all those who read the poem here on POEM HUNTER.COM..give me pleasure..pleasure of many kinds that is difficult to explain in words thanks you all

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Heather Wilkins 01 June 2013

A lovely sonnet. till there is a sun shall not dew perish Hope and struggle unto future ye must kiss.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 04 May 2013

AN INVIGORATING SONNET TO ENJOY! VERY NICE WITH RHYME AND RHYTHM !

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Valerie Dohren 03 May 2013

Excellent sonnet Atfab, the sun as a symbol of hope - lovely.

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Valsa George 03 May 2013

Kindling the light of hope in depressed minds, this poem energizes and invgorates! ! Enjoyed reading it! !

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David Wood 02 May 2013

A sonnet of hope. A wonderful poem that is light and spontanious.

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Wahab Abdul 01 May 2013

you have a very good hand to excel in poetry, carry on...keep doing..i like yr poetry...

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Elena Sandu 30 April 2013

Till there is the sun, shall not dew perish? Powerful, energizing poem, thank you!

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Yasmin Khan 30 April 2013

A hope poem with optimism running through each word and phrase.

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Neela Nath Das 29 April 2013

A wonderful sonnet. Loved the spontaneity of expression!

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Valerie Dohren 29 April 2013

A lovely sonnet Aftab, I especially like the last verse - a poem of hope.

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Shaila Touchton 29 April 2013

Very Nice! Keep it up

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Wahab Abdul 28 April 2013

you write very nice poem, i read it again and again...lovely one

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Gajanan Mishra 28 April 2013

open the window, there is the sun. meaningful poem Aftab Alam. thanks.

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