Awake, awake, O my torn fate! Be wise
Why do you fall? Can't you rise?
Hurry up! before the body is buried deep,
Keep thy change that ye must keep.
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A lovely sonnet. till there is a sun shall not dew perish Hope and struggle unto future ye must kiss.
AN INVIGORATING SONNET TO ENJOY! VERY NICE WITH RHYME AND RHYTHM !
Kindling the light of hope in depressed minds, this poem energizes and invgorates! ! Enjoyed reading it! !
you have a very good hand to excel in poetry, carry on...keep doing..i like yr poetry...
Till there is the sun, shall not dew perish? Powerful, energizing poem, thank you!
A lovely sonnet Aftab, I especially like the last verse - a poem of hope.
you write very nice poem, i read it again and again...lovely one
open the window, there is the sun. meaningful poem Aftab Alam. thanks.
Being wise is good always and inviting fate to be in life wisely to give fortune is definitely Interesting. This poem awakes reminding rising of sun in life to overcome the darkest moment. Wonderful sharing definitely....10