Sunday, September 11, 2011
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As a loose garment,
Let not the soul be bound to
Any worldly goods.
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Walterrean Salley
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Fabrizio Frosini
01 September 2015
why you call it ''senryu''? your composition hasn't got the features of a classic senryu, Salley
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7/26/2025 4:03:53 AM # 1.0.0
Thank you, Fabrizio, for your time, and keen observation. And critique. Would you please send me, or post here, the instructions for writing a classic senryu, just like you did when posting your comments for the “haiku: Mown Grass. And I shalll try to work it to perfection. With appreciation. -ws