Monday, June 20, 2016

Be Free Comments

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Freedom!
From what?
From governments which dictate what we can and cannot do?
From strangers who judge us without knowing who we are?
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Dev Anand 10 July 2016

Be free from all inhibitions...... enjoy life and live ur own life, build up a philosophy on your own., you are not a puppet or a marionette....... be free is a call which we have to make true in our own lives. Every person is a unique human being......... and you are sooo unique in your poems......

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Jayne Doe 10 July 2016

I also agree one must live to the fullest and be an individual. Thank you for your feedback! It was a pleasure to read.

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Terry Craddock 20 June 2016

'From governments which dictate what we can and cannot do? From strangers who judge us without knowing who we are? From friends who stomp on our wings and then ask us to fly? From family with expectations no one could reach? ' beautiful, first freedom is from ourselves, feel free be liberated 10+

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Jayne Doe 21 June 2016

Thank you for reading the poem and the taking the time to comment on it. I appreciate it!

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Chuy Amante 20 June 2016

freedom from our ego free everything and it's free but too costly for some they can keep paying freedom from all is the state of no ego and only we can align that I loved reading this poem and it was free!

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Jayne Doe 21 June 2016

Thank you for your thought-provoking response!

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