Be Cool Poem by Abiir little me

Be Cool



Oh, to be in a pit hole
All thoughts and every thought
Against you, never for you

Bottled on the floor
You yell at the lord
And the devil restored

You walk out of the door
Crumbled, ain't sure
Above all, thinking like a fool

Endure, endure, here's the cure with one rule
Say no to the obscure and hit it with the pure
It'll be a new start, let us be cool

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
January was about to be my most hated month. I was gonna make it a fact that all januarys are bad. I am here talking about describing a bit the stat of being filled with toxic thoughts. It's a big lesson I learned that month. Never keep the bad thoughts, always hit them with positivity. And you'll forever be free, Amen
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Freni Karaluthara 20 February 2025

The message of enduring tough times and choosing what is right is inspiring. Your words remind us that even in hard moments, we can find a fresh start. A beautiful and encouraging poem!

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Freni Karaluthara 20 February 2025

Abiir Little Me, your poem Be Cool is a strong and meaningful piece about facing struggles and finding hope. You describe the feeling of being lost and unsure in a powerful way, but you also show that there is a way to move forward.

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