Wednesday, July 31, 2013

Be Composed, Dear Brother! Comments

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Be composed; don’t take the next flight,
When you are toasted under the hot sun,
Left with cloudy water and surrounded by the flies,
When your leather shoes are smeared with dirt,
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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi
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Ramesh Rai 03 August 2013

well done sister. a good msg to the people of this world need not to communicate to politician bcoz they are not to listen grand write

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 31 July 2013

Reality clearly presented. You did not touch politics yet. Beautiful poem.

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Dave Walker 31 July 2013

A really great poem, great work.

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