Saturday, September 2, 2017

Be Careful, Angel! Comments

Rating: 5.0

Slowdown,
Your wings should not make an irritating sound
It should move producing the beats of a violin.
A slow and peace bringing tune
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Kumarmani Mahakul 09 September 2017

He never desired fame and name. Unknown he lived and unknown he will die. But it's me who knows him very well. Be careful Angel, I have erased all paintings of his sins, he is a Very Important Soul you will land here with him and walk on a carpet of rainbow... loved these lines. Haunting expression.

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Valsa George 04 September 2017

Lofty thoughts! Remarkable rendition! He sounds so exemplary!

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Rajnish Manga 03 September 2017

He loved all irrespective of their color and belief Irrespective of their culture and nationality. He never desired fame and name. Unknown he lived and unknown he will die.... //.... A grand imagery mounted on a mega scale with exquisite expressions like 'Touch him.... in the manner how essence is extracted from a rose. The poem is a big joy to read and has a very humane touch. Thank you, Sir.

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Khalid Saifullah 03 September 2017

A beautiful imagination of life and death..............................................

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