Tuesday, September 23, 2014

Be Calm And Cool Comments

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Rippling water gives a shimmering image,
Calm and placid water gives a perfect image,
Minuscule molecules of water, haven't seen, I,
Miffed water, disturbs image, witness the eye
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Amitava Sur 23 September 2014

Loosing the calm and being agitated does not help us in anyway at last, very well said.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 September 2014

Rippling water gives a shimmering image, Calm and placid water gives a perfect image, Nice, the poem has a lovely message.

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Savita Tyagi 23 September 2014

If you are an soul of angry dust....love the lines and love the poem. Thanks for sharing.

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 23 September 2014

Why to be an agitating entity; be calm and cool, This is the world of wise; stop nicknaming it fool Good advice. Taken note.. :))

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