Saturday, January 3, 2015

Be By My Side- A Prayer Comments

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In the wild confusion of my life, I see your face
A kind countenance making bright my days
Through rugged tracks when I stumble along
I feel an unseen hand holding me strong
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Valsa George
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Edward Kofi Louis 07 May 2017

My inner eye! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 03 September 2015

Pure and untainted mind and body. What more can i add on a Prayer so beautiful? except ask Him to be my guiding Light too.

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 29 January 2015

Great reading! Soulful prayer! It does a catharsis.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 15 January 2015

Prayer rendered with serene thoughts. Reading it is a nice way to start a day.

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 15 January 2015

Hello poet friend. This is indeed a very inspirational poem, I am sure all who read will be blessed. Well done! Loyd

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Daniel Brick 14 January 2015

You have composed a modern day version of a PSALM. Not like the one translated as MY LORD IS A MIGHTY MAN OF WAR. (KING JAMES BIBLE - A Man of War was actually the largest British warship with one hundred cannon - I'm not sure what the original Hebrew says, but it too would be a bellicose image.) Your psalm is close in spirit to the ones with pastoral settings like THE LORD IS MY SHEPHERD, and it focuses on God's gifts to us and our gratitude. It reveals good will and blessings on both sides of the divine-human interchange. And that restores some of the purity of our lives which overflows in childhood and then dries up unless fructified by the Prayer of Thanksgiving. Your prayer is much needed in this world where people MUST chant Je Suis Charlie.

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Savita Tyagi 10 January 2015

Make me feel you are in every rhythm of my life. Amen to that. Wonderful testament of your faith and love. Thanks for sharing Valsa.

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A powerful and passionate prayer of protection and providence that makes the Potentate proud!

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 January 2015

A Beautiful prayer, touching ones heart. Loved reading each lines. It cools and calms ones heart, especially while sailing through rough times... Loved it.

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Om Chawla 06 January 2015

Excellently written, every word of the poem sounds sincere expression of your inner feelings. Thanks for sharing.

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Salini Nair 05 January 2015

I pray, you be with me as an abiding presence piloting me............................great prayer....great work

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Kavya . 05 January 2015

an awesome poem i got to read at the start of the new year....We always look up to Him, our God, in the wild confusion of our lfe, and believe n trust him wholeheartedly as he is our only guiding light. A very soothing and outstanding prayer Mam

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Soulful Heart 05 January 2015

such a touching prayer.......to be chanted by every human heart..................thanx for putting words in our universal quest............................words that make eyes go misty with acknowledgement..

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Rajesh Thankappan 04 January 2015

By reposing the faith in God and by allowing his Holy presence in your life, you have set the sail to move in the right direction. By our humble supplication to the Almighty, we not only acknowledge His presence but also His omnipotence and omnipresence.....10

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Akhtar Jawad 03 January 2015

An impressive poem, acknowledgements and prayers, in beautiful words and nice style.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 03 January 2015

A personal communication or petition addressed to God esp in the form of supplication, adoration, praise, contrition, or thanksgiving can make our life beautiful and divinely.......Valsa......amazing write......10

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Kee Thampi 03 January 2015

poetess open our prayer book for snarks of divine ark Make me feel, you are there in every rhythm of life More when life becomes burdensome with problems I lovedivie feett

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Saheb Mohapatra 03 January 2015

yes lord shall always stay beside you.....................this is what we pray...................this is really a beautiful poem, i can surely consider this the best prayer to be ever written in such a beautiful rhyme and words.............thanks

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Rajnish Manga 03 January 2015

To me, this prayer is fit to be recited at morning assemblies in each and every school apart from being a prayer for every single soul elsewhere. This prayer has squeezed into it the righteousness and other virtues which we have read about in various prayers in our day to day life. What an appeal! ! When I pride over my own trivial accomplishments You remind me of my helplessness through mild chastisements When I lose myself in the grip of vanity You open my inner eye to restore my sanity.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 03 January 2015

In the wild confusion of life a soul wanders here and there and definitely watches the face of God in imagination to find the path. He urges Lord to keep him in safety and prays for release out of pain and agony. Very nice and wonderful prayer poem shared on. Hearty touching.

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