Thursday, July 11, 2019

Be Aware Comments

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Be aware that,
Much in life
Is unfair
So make sure
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Sandra Feldman
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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 July 2019

A fine warning. It’s true that life is in peril every hour. We need to be always on guard. Excellent poem, dear Ma’am Sandra...10+++++

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Prabir Gayen 11 July 2019

Be aware that, Much in life Is unfair So make sure You check your chair Before sitting on it, Take care... beautiful

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Dr Dillip K Swain 11 July 2019

This is not the right poem my friend! I won't support it because many times we fail to study things in proper ways! Be part of our struggle.... encourage tempary approaches which are very much needed to provide justice to genuine poets!

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Sandra Feldman 11 July 2019

I changed the line, , " nothing in life is fair " to " Much in life is unfair" maybe the nothing was too absolute. But I really don't know what struggle you are talking about nor how I have to encourage " tempary approches" ? This little poem was meant as a simple warning, to look where you go or sit, for in life there are always unseen dangers.How this can take away from " justice for genuine poets" really perplexes me? ?

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