Thursday, January 16, 2020

Be Assured Comments

Rating: 5.0

There's something sublime about nature and time
that repeats till its meaning is clear.
Every night turns to day in the very same way,
every day into weeks, months and years
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Lodigiana Poetess
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Shaun Cronick 16 January 2020

So cleverly written and again a poem so lovingly presented Lodigiana. Some people might miss the beat and wonderfully woven rhyme flow. You are gifted poetess with a beautiful mind. I look forward to whatever you write next. Thank you for sharing this Lodigiana.10++ and added to my favs. Take care and the loved ones around you.

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Lodigiana Poetess 16 January 2020

I'm so pleased you caught the rhythm I was aiming for..I felt because the message is quite important I didn't want to make it appear too sombre, so looked to find an Iambic Pentameter style of flow..I hope it works. I do so appreciate your reading my bits and pieces and your comments are always so uplifting.Thank you so much Shaun! x

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Denis Mair 16 January 2020

It takes special wisdom to be encouraged by Nature and to learn Nature's lessons of persistence, acceptance and hope. To my Favorites List.

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Lodigiana Poetess 16 January 2020

Thank you so much Denis! We do have so much to learn and accept through nature and life don't we? Really appreciate your generous comments. Lodigiana x

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