Friday, April 17, 2009

Be As We Be Comments

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Hearts and heads
Like parachutes
Work best when inflated,
Open to break the fall.
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Alyssa Long
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Sam Fitts 09 May 2009

Always moving forward never looking back, I can see a moral application to life through here.

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Gwendolyn Miller 08 May 2009

Alyssa! This poem reminds me of one of those daily secret inspiration pieces. I love the truth in this poem!

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 22 April 2009

the lines are finely done.. the flow is amazing.. u amazing! great poem

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