Sunday, September 15, 2019

Be A Stream Of My Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

If you will be a stream of my dream
I will stand by you like a tree to watch
You grow steadily. To see myself in your
Glassy surface that bears the sky. I will
...
Read full text

Anil Kumar Panda
COMMENTS
Carl Roussell 15 September 2019

The lines, If you 'Will be a stream of my dream I will have My grave in your soft sand to hear the song Of love you murmur as you go on flowing.', are brilliant, a 10! !

0 0 Reply
Bernard F. Asuncion 15 September 2019

A well composed lovely poem...10+++

0 0 Reply
Close
Error Success