Sunday, July 5, 2009

*****(Be A Man) ***** Comments

Rating: 3.5

reliviling all, that you said
rereading the words
over n over, in my head
TRYING TO UNDERSTAND? ? ? ?
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krissi b'williams
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Olympia Melone 11 December 2009

you need a good man..10s

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Teresa Babson 29 September 2009

boys will be boys and men will be men

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a beautiful way of telling a story...

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 10 July 2009

A man would talk right to your face rather than hiding behind the bush.An awe inspiring poem you have got here Krissi.Good job dear!

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reliviling all, that you said rereading the words over n over, in my head TRYING TO UNDERSTAND? ? ? ? sad to believe all this... it is retracing steps that pinches us more in life.. very embrassing too...10 read mine mary to marry and, miss i miss you along with cowardice act

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Priya Arora 05 July 2009

he, (A MAN) , would have been straight, and talked about why exactly he needed to leave, what could never be worked out... Awesome krissi...i simply love your poetry specially this poem in which you jot down 'Be a Man'..If you can't stand by your commetments..your words..and inspite of facing the fact you are finding the reasons to leave without saying goodbye..by disgracing this pious relation let me know where do you fit..awesome..Man is one who can stand by his words..his commitments..his decisions..awsome sweetheart..your write can give inspiration to servral grls around that in case some guy dont stand by his commitmnets and dare to take them for graned..then don't sit ideal..hit back and make them clear..by the way you expressed your thoughts.. Thanks for sharing)

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Lady Grace 05 July 2009

this is very long to read..but its ok..this letter is my gosh..maybe youre so young..coz you cant fix still your feelings...you can recognize if she/he is still a boy or a full grown..you can detect it..you can..and if you want my advice, then just let him what he'she will do..just let him so that he would know the proper on how to show love or care..he will know that..

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Jazmin M. Baird 05 July 2009

I really like this poem very nicely done! ! ! ! Umm..did you get your emotions out? ?

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