Be A Lamp! ! ! Comments

I find this a beautiful poem with rich images that stand before our eyes. Good language and flow.

Either be a lamp Sitting at a place, Emitting light beams For swarming moths' solace.........// superb poem penned be a lamp be a lighter be a lightened path be the guider the path be the the crown of the path be the rider of the throne be the love for all

Superb lines composed like a song sir, Thanks sir

A nice philosophical poem shows how to live for others.

Well expressed! Be a lamp or be the moth! Be the forest or the seed constitute it thanks for sharing!

Be a lamp to all with respect. Nice work.

Amazing philosophical poem and a great articulation based on our day to day observations. Thanks.

This poem reminded me of a song I learnt during school days: Some like it hot, some like it cold, and some like it in the pot,9 days old. Though a lot depends on our circumstances and our destinies, I agree a lot depends on our personal choices too. Nice poem!

My tongue might be too poor for your poems! But my heart has a lot of space to fill, I take the liberty to let some of your poems go straight to it, thank you for writing so beautifully! ..I would like to be a moth....

what a profound thought...told so poetically..this poem inspires

Or be a seed, Vast forest in embryo; Rachel Ann Butler

I would prefer be a seed. NICE creation of yours. i liked it.10++

simple and eloquent words to ponder on........ the poem make me not to sit and make me write write write.............

Every person to choose own path...Thanks for this introspective and wise write. Best wishes and keep on your path. A.

Such a profound piece shared! Symbolic one! ! !

O if I could be a lamp, or a moth, or a forest, or a seed… Beautiful poem with nice idea.10+++

oh. a great insight.10 shan

wise poem wonderfully said.10++++

' Either be a lamp... Or be a moth... Either be a forest... Or be a seed...' 10 for this wonderful positive poem.

if i would be given a chance to live again....i will be like you..........because you have the creative mind and you shared it to poetry and artisitically, you touch the hearts and minds of your readers................ I WILL BE LIKE YOU! ....... thanks for this poem..............very unique artistic poem.................thanks.