Be A Hero Comments

take a look first of ourselves... maybe we are one of the factor that contribute in the distruction of the world we live.....a hero is not born but a vision to live and a life to take....be a hero is not just a call, but life to share in this wonderful world... a ten point...hope everybody would read this poem....not only we as poet as those who don't care their lives...thank you

When we take a good look at this world and the things that so wrong...it makes you want to close your eyes and mind..yet the heart feels it all.....To reach out and touch a soul that pulls away out of fear of hurt returning....need understanding to heal.........not so easy in a world that so many are reluctant to share a helping hand in..........constructive thought builds bridges for hopes and dreams to cross....lets just hope it happens before the ever widening gap between humanity becomes uncrossable excellent piece...well composed and thought out poem...the message clear 10++ best wishes Jon.

Wow! That was really deep and really good. I agree. I help as much as i can. I really like it.

i do try to help ppl when i can, but the world is a mesed up place these day, and some ppl i have foud are scared to accept the help.