Thursday, September 8, 2011

Be A Dream Comments

Rating: 4.9

tell the wave...
not to burn
tell the fire...
not to wet
...
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ahmed khaled
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Soul Watcher 13 November 2014

كلمات بالرغم من قصرها ولكنها تحميل معاني جميلة خلفها شكرا على المشاركة

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Okoye Charles Chukwudi 15 February 2012

nice poem.......short and deep....very deep....keep it up check out my poem 2b or not 2b.....thanks for sharing

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Emily Gasperak 08 January 2012

Your poem is very nicely written! Great job! !

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Bella Hernandez 04 January 2012

beautiful and short 'n elegant many meaning one that i can see is to be yourself! and all of the things to do is to Dream! ! ! ~Bella

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Shadrach Knight 04 January 2012

Thanks for showing me this, It was wonderful.

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Jonathan Westler 04 January 2012

I think this is a really good poem. I'll admit, I'm not a huge fan of the word wet here, but as it is your intellectual property, I will not tell you to change it. I definitely like it, though!

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Michael Stevens 04 January 2012

i like it, its deep in a way. tells one to be true to himself. at least that is what i see in it.

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Grant Lovell 04 January 2012

Indeed, some talent there. Very good.

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Smoky Hoss 03 January 2012

Yes. I like this, each should be true to their own nature; and beauty (the flower) is ofcourse the most magnificent and mystical. Very good.

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Areeba Sohail 03 January 2012

This poem is just too short! Isn’t it? ? ? ? but it carries too many meanings nice!

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Lyllie Menjivar 02 January 2012

Very strong meanings, and its a very unique poem indeed.- DarkX474

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Vipins Puthooran 02 January 2012

Excellent poetic fantasy/ 10

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Hans Vr 30 December 2011

Very poetic call for authenticity. A very nice poem, Ahmed Original and a pleasure to read

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blue serene 29 December 2011

it is so nice. it conveys lots of thoughts here. nice work. u really are a great poet. :)

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Benjamin Paa Willie 29 December 2011

That is a really good. I will re-read it tomorrow, sure.

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Ebi Robert 29 December 2011

short but reavealing

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Lusekelo Simwela 29 December 2011

wow this will make me read your other stuff... nice writing

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Jacqui Broad 28 December 2011

I really like this. Telling the people not to chase after the bad and selling their souls to the devil, perhaps? The flower presenting innocence, peace and beauty. Sometimes just a dream... A great poem, Ahmed.

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Patti Masterman 28 December 2011

wow, so short but full of loveliness :)

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Claudia Krizay 28 December 2011

Very delicately beautiful, in just a few words. I have trouble written short poems that mean anything- I envy you! Excellent work!

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