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Be careful, be free
Be stable like the tree
Be in your spot, don't flee
Stand, never bends your knee
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Majid Gaggi
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Bri Edwards 23 November 2017

your poem curves like a woman's torso, fine. it's created by each consecutive poetic line. how many more lines to rhyme with these? lines about seas, trees, knees, and degrees? ? bri :)

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