Wednesday, June 25, 2008

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Be the tall mountains on land
Be the crashing waves in the sea.
I know you are my lover
Come out and say it to me.
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Secret Yellow Rock Chick
clouds thunderstorm Mountains
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Bill Thomas 22 July 2008

Oh wow - tight structure, lovely scansion, superb images, & evokes real feelings that bring tears to the eyes (good ones!) Keep it up, SYRC! ! - you have a real gift here.

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Sadiqullah Khan 26 June 2008

fine emotions expressed so softly, , , , thanx for sharing

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Secret Yellow Rock Chick

Secret Yellow Rock Chick

Melbourne
Secret Yellow Rock Chick
Secret Yellow Rock Chick
Melbourne
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