Thursday, June 20, 2013

(bbbb) Poetic Perfumery Comments

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O' poets switch off today all senses but one
as you enter the arena of aroma
As I nose out the world's perfumes
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s.zaynab kamoonpury
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Joe Breunig 20 March 2014

An interesting piece; appreciated the message. -Joe Breunig, author/poet, Reaching Towards His Unbounded Glory

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Soulful Heart 03 March 2014

Hmmmmmmm......thats taking in the perfumes blended together to invoke our olfactory cells....the ancient natural ones and the recent synthetic ones completely apart in content yet functioning d same.....great write

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Roseann Shawiak 17 January 2014

Very original idea, I like it. Felt like I was in a perfume factory myself and taking in all the beautiful scents. Very sensual too. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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Muhammad Ali 10 December 2013

nice poem. v nicely expressed. it is more difficult to express more ordinary. peace.

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Bri Edwards 23 November 2013

i prefer the smells of cooking meat and vegetables, and fresh fruit, and cheese, and baking baked goods, and CHOCOLATE! it really is rare that i smell perfume, but it is pleasing (for me) to smell an enticing aromatic trail of a mysterious lady. a few times i have smelled one which brought back fond memories of a woman from my past. thanks for sharing. :) thanks for rhymes and alliterations. e.g. Sensual scents do swell for sentient man to satisfy his olfactory cell, to gratify his sense of smell and arena of aroma p.s. there were a couple of guys on the bus today who could have used some sandalwood or jasmine! ! !

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Hasnain Aaqib 28 July 2013

very nice write and a creative effort matching a meterical expression.

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Lyn Paul 07 July 2013

What a wonderful write, I smell beauty in these words. Thank you.

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Xelam Kan™ 04 July 2013

Wow, great and unique way of Describing sense of smelling...... Feels i m in French Mall where every sort of fragrance sprinkled around.......... From east to west......world of perfumery rejoicing us Though bit lengthy but still Well penned.

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hi my friend how niiiice very beautiful thank you good luck

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 23 June 2013

olfactory refinement a universal call very nice

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R.benjamin Abate 22 June 2013

Very nice. I like the ending here This isn't meant to be a sales catalogue/ It's merely to present the perfumes in vogue - you're lines about perfumes are so refreshing. Thanks.

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Lorraine Colon 21 June 2013

I really enjoyed this. I could almost smell the beautiful fragrances you mentioned. I grow lavender, roses, honeysuckle, and I always stop to smell them when I'm in the garden. I agree - long live our sense of smell!

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Gajanan Mishra 20 June 2013

sophisticated and pleasant, good poem, thanks. I invite you to read my poems and vote and comment.

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