(bbb) Uphill And Downhill Through Life Comments

Very true, nice to read thanks

Very good, certain things happen to us to help our soul grow, If were allowed to stay in this life,

.....u suggest so many ways to explore life and experience its paradoxes...great work...

Loaded with live! Well done my friend!

A grand write on the ups and downs of life with worthy metaphors to follow on the path that lies ahead...regards

I know you observe and then absorb deeply and then you sprinkle well done 10

I found that life is a school room, we are here to learn, nothing is for ever, everything is a dream, and what we think and keep in our minds will became reality. However, I went through many, many problems in my life, but it is possible to overcome it, find peace and happiness when we give up the wants and wishes with the strong will, but go on life's road day by day, blessing everyone who touched our life for good or bad, because they made us stronger and wiser, expecting peace and happiness, but take what comes and solve the challenge the best we can. Go with the wind and sail the quiet waters. You can do it, it is in your name.

A grand philosophy for life, rich with metaphors and imagery. A downright great write- worth a 10.Thank you for your recent comment

Stuning, you so adaptly examine exsistence with good metaphors that are unique, this was both funny and endearing and the message id one of thoughtful meditation of a very wise mind Take life for a candle let its glow illumine others too and in each and every of its flicker Try finding a hint or clue thoughtful as well as humorous, a well penned write

Fit for life and the miracle of Jesus.

This poem has been worked through metaphors and similes in order to explain a complicated subject-philosophy of life. It's crafted wisely.

Take life for an escalator Go both through its ups and downs Ride it like on an elevator Expect both smiles and frowns. ....... Take life for a candle let its glow illumine others too and in each and every of its flicker Try finding a hint or clue very nice philosophical liked

Its just like a prayer. A wonderful poem that was a joy to read.

A marvellous poem.. Loved the way you started the poem building the scenario through out every sentence, very beautiful figure of speech.. I enjoyed reading each and every sentence.. Inspiring poem..

Wonderful words, I felt it as a prayer. Thank you

A unique analogy: Take life for an escalator Go both through its ups and downs... A common experience, and keen observation: Ride it like on an elevator Expect both smiles and frowns. blindness to the next moment: Take life for a suspense novel you and I unaware what the next day will hold How true: Take life for a candle let its glow illumine others too life is a roller coaster... Thus ponder over your life and reflect how good you've been to it and not just how it's been treating you Salam Zaynub! ! !

but within the darkness... is where we live... and the light is just an Illusion? Great write...gets me thinking...and waxing poetic.; -) -Kelly.

Very nice poem; especially l love this sentence Life tis like the rise and fall of notes Consoling to find people in the same boats thank you.