Bbb) Sweet Revenge Comments

Pen is mightier than sword. Any wish for poetic justice sing it in poetry... Nice one congratz

Well, i'm not that brave but it is a sublime composure, thanks!

Lovely poetry- wise, witty, and funny- another tenner.

A tongue in cheek look at sweet revenge the gentle way...put away the long knives...regards

But a tooth for a tooth will it actually soothe? That strikes the credulity of being human.... surely will serve the purpose, 'and will the swords go back to sheath'. Effective pen!

nice poem sister. nice poetic work and peaceful message.

wonderfully written..enjoyed it.

Sweet it might seem, sweet at first feel but it's really sour as an orange peel. ...And first read we know it sweet and not sour as orange peel_Soul

Very good write. Your rhyme-pattern is noteworthy. Go on.

Fantastic poem! A Great write in music sweet! A sure 10 for this! !

This is a wonderful lesson taught a the most gentle way! Loved to read it, thank you!

You have tried to delve deep into the philosophy of revenge. Use of simile like orange peel explains the idea vividly. I can give reference to a well-known song by Luis Enrique Mejia Godoy, the Nicaraguan singer with the title 'Revenge'.

a good write on revenge

Excellent stuff, I love the rhymming and impressed by your wit. I do not relish sermons but this was a splendor

a sweet sermon pleasant to read! ! !

lovely poem on revenge well penned keep it up

lovely poem on revenge well penned keep it up

a well thought out poem and very crafty, love it