Wednesday, August 13, 2008

Bayonet Comments

Rating: 4.0

*Please Note*
This is not a poem. It is a short story.
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Joseph Winters winced as a wave broke over the front of the Higgins
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Dylan Barker
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Greenwolfe 1962 14 August 2008

First, I appreciate the fact that you told the reader that it was a short story at the beginning. I wish every writer of every item on Poemhunter did that. Unfortunately, we have this fantasy in writing to day that the reader is on his own and he has to figure everything out for himself. Because you didn't do that, I recommend this short story. Ther quality of any story lies within it. GW62

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