Friday, September 14, 2018

Baying At Two Moons Comments

Rating: 5.0

The moon is full above Mount Inglismaldie
and mirrored on obsidian Two Jack Lake;
the nights are growing long, but no Vivaldi
concertos leap the seasons' firebreak—
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John Beaton
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 September 2018

Dear poet Beaton, you have so touchingly inscribed the wildlife encounter when you were camping in the mountains of Alberta beside a calm lake that reflected the moon. I love the following lines.... her loneliness—she's come so close to me, it seems as though she may have lost a mate and sensing me has sparked an urge to yowl to any living thing for company, but, even so, I don't anticipate the utter woebegoneness of her howl. Thanks.10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 15 September 2018

John, such a well penned poem👍👍👍

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