Saturday, March 22, 2014

Bay Views Rolling Mills Comments

Rating: 5.0

There was a test of wills
At Bay Views Rolling mills
A fight for an eight hour day
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David Semenske
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Kim Barney 06 March 2015

Very nicely done. Enjoyed your reading of the poem. Your voice has a very pleasing sound. There are three differences between the printed words and the spoken ones, however. 1. printed: RIFLE spoken: RIFLES 2. printed: LIE DEAD spoken: LAY DEAD 3. printed: THE ONE WE ENJOY TODAY spoken: THE ONE THAT WE ENJOY TODAY Congratulations on having it selected as poem of the day!

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Mj Lemon 06 March 2015

Phil Ochs...Woody Guthrie...Gordon Lightfoot...Bay Views Rolling Mills. This is a great work...A 10

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John Richter 06 March 2015

Interesting. Enjoyed your vocalization of the poem too....

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Babatunde Aremu 06 March 2015

A very rare poem on rare topic: Labor Struggle. Great write

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