Battleships = Love (C) 8-22-09 Comments

It fascinates me how you can have such a perfect perspective on things, and put them in words. I agree with this poem, it's truth.

I like how you compare love with a battleship, it's possible and the finished product is great.10+

Looks like you are trying to find your true love. Great poem

I love this poem, and the words you picked. It's so true.

I love this.... Its perfect....great choice of words never stop writing^^

i completely agree with this saying.. great arrangement of words!

An interesting of looking at targeting the right love. Adorable.

Cute lil beauty there. remarkable expressions.

a very good way of looking at it. i'm glad you got the correct coordinates, for that bullseye of love. a ten

i have never thought of it like it but its so true great job keep them coming

Making a splash with this one.... keep firing them off buddy! !

I agree with Varanasi I would merge as well, but all together I found this a much enjoyed, truthful piece of work.I applaud you for this sense of knowledge at a young age as well.Very well penned.I will check out more of yours and hope you will check out mine.

'Merge' is a more positive word than 'sink'. Nice expression.