Saturday, February 2, 2008

Battles Comments

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Battles


Everyday could be a battle won or lost
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JoAnn McGrath
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Melvina Germain 16 February 2008

I think the first line is excellent, 'everyday could be a battle' with the operatlive word being 'could', therefore we can change that whole thing and make sure that everyday is a positive experience and not a baattle because we are after all in charge of our own destiny. I prefer to think that 'everyday is a blessing'. That's just the way I see it. Very good write JoJo. Melvina

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 03 February 2008

Battles are the way of life, I wonder if some ones keeping score in the after life..?

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David Harris 03 February 2008

JoAnn, top marks for a start, loved this one as I'm in the same sentiment as you. Thanks for sharing this lil sis. Big Bruv

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Thad Wilk 02 February 2008

Nice write JoAnn! ! You'll win the battle every time, with your wit and with your rime! ! Best wishes Friend Thad

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