Tuesday, January 29, 2008

Battlepoem Comments

Rating: 2.9

The price we paid is the blood we shed.
Our bones unmarked by granite stone.
We are alone here and we are dead.
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Michael Pruchnicki
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ngaio beck 02 March 2008

Heartbreaking! An old soldier.

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Charles Garcia 21 February 2008

Thank you mick; from someone that has been there and still here, I am going on a re-union from my ship USS Harry E. Hubbard DD748 in Baltimore in April,2008 I am one of few living members from ww11 era I willl be 84 years old next. great tribute to us oldies. charles garcia

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Fred Babbin 02 February 2008

It brings back memories of my friend who died in France in WWII.

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Ivor Hogg 02 February 2008

Beautifully constructed flawless vilanelle a plasure to read in theses of free form writing Although the subject matter is sombre

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Matthew Ralph 01 February 2008

interesting rhyming structure and repetition. imagery is vivid and clear. confident composition. well done lad..

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Goldy Locks 29 January 2008

Writing is edged with sword and flame. keep on, Michael.

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L G 29 January 2008

i live near chicago too. just thought i'd let you know. but anyway, I love your poem, it has good detail and the structure is different. did you expierence your poem?

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