Monday, June 7, 2010

Battlefield Comments

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I fear the long and blackened night
I fear the fear in those in a battlefield fight
I fear that the general will advance the troops
and the hearts of the mothers at home
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David Johnson
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Dj Sklarski 17 April 2011

wow... this is crazy good. so much emotion. and the repetition really drives it home... i love this.

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