Tuesday, December 16, 2008

Battlefield Comments

Rating: 5.0

From a land of sand arise two kinds of warrior
A vagabonds leading into the same phenomenon
Pass through up hill and down dale
Crushing every stones hanging from fountains
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Min Sia
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Gargi Saha 07 January 2009

A WONDERFUL POEM...............

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Reshma Ramesh 18 December 2008

well done and well done......................! !

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Ridge Cahill 18 December 2008

Excellently done, you both should be proud of this accomplishment.

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Kesav Easwaran 18 December 2008

a poetic story of 'Grace' and 'Glory'...narrated very emotionally, Min...i feel the poem isn't complete...you have more to spill out in your heart on this...10

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Fiona Davidson 17 December 2008

lovely well written story...very descriptive...thank you

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Ency Bearis 16 December 2008

wonderful narrative poem....well written, nice flow - meter..good collaboration Min and Naru...thumbs up 10***** Ency Bearis

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Loyd C Taylor Sr 16 December 2008

Hello poet, an awesome read. Loyd

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 16 December 2008

You killed the man that loves you? ? ? well, we can call this the battlefield of sadness.Remember Min, every man is a warrior when they say they love you.He's your warrior.

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C T Heart 16 December 2008

The wild and passionate act, sensual poetry intertwined.

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Sarah Sisson 16 December 2008

pretty wild... I love it!

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Anjali Sinha 16 December 2008

wowwww! ! ! ! ! ! your battlefield explodes the splinters pierced the inners of my heart well done MIN AND NARU I LOVE YOU BOTH God Bless A++++++ anjali

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Edward Kofi Louis 16 December 2008

Yes! You are showing the class of your poetry.Keep it up and let us also learn from you.Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.

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Naru Kaede 16 December 2008

Yeah, we made it my dear friend...! ! ! Very a fabulous compare...! ! ! A wonderful masterpiece...! ! ! A beautiful pair...! ! ! Hope our friendship always be strong and never be apart...! ! ! Love you GIRL, My Dearest Best Friend Min Sia...

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