From a land of sand arise two kinds of warrior
A vagabonds leading into the same phenomenon
Pass through up hill and down dale
Crushing every stones hanging from fountains
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Excellently done, you both should be proud of this accomplishment.
a poetic story of 'Grace' and 'Glory'...narrated very emotionally, Min...i feel the poem isn't complete...you have more to spill out in your heart on this...10
wonderful narrative poem....well written, nice flow - meter..good collaboration Min and Naru...thumbs up 10***** Ency Bearis
You killed the man that loves you? ? ? well, we can call this the battlefield of sadness.Remember Min, every man is a warrior when they say they love you.He's your warrior.
wowwww! ! ! ! ! ! your battlefield explodes the splinters pierced the inners of my heart well done MIN AND NARU I LOVE YOU BOTH God Bless A++++++ anjali
Yes! You are showing the class of your poetry.Keep it up and let us also learn from you.Thank you. Edward Kofi Louis.
Yeah, we made it my dear friend...! ! ! Very a fabulous compare...! ! ! A wonderful masterpiece...! ! ! A beautiful pair...! ! ! Hope our friendship always be strong and never be apart...! ! ! Love you GIRL, My Dearest Best Friend Min Sia...
A WONDERFUL POEM...............