Battle Wounds - An Ode To Shahzia Batool Comments

you left out blight and fright, BUT it's all right. [first i spelled it 'alright', but after a little online research i found alright is a misspelling] thanks for sharing. :) bri

Once again Powerful write and lovely ode to shahzia..Loved reading it.

A brilliant work! ! ! You grabbed the readers' attention from the start. There is a war that I wage at every night With my biggest enemy, Myself, I fight Indeed a powerful write! ! !

A great dedication and a powerful write! Yes my biggest enemy is myself! For this weighty write, I give you a 10

With my biggest enemy, Myself, I fight . Weighing my wrongs than all my right . Startled knowing I'll never wake up to light . Written on a unique idea...war with one's own-self...beautifully worded poem...wounds r in the 4m of mental agony...invisible 2 others but ever-fresh 4 the sufferer...

It touched bhayya Thank you so much for turning an ordinary day into a special one! Regards

i really love this one! How the hardest battles are not always with you'r 'enemy' but yourself! keep up the good work!