Battle To The Death Over Groceries And Toys Comments

Yeah! I tend to agree that thisis not an easy thing to read, nor is it quite easy to understand. I suppose I know what you are saying, but I am not sure. More clarity is definitely needed. GW62

Beau, I agree with Tai about the splendid title. Also the content is very strong. I would find the poem easier to read if you broke it up into stanzas, but you communicate your message loud and clear. Warmly, Alison

I like this Beau. Needs a slight edit, The 'i's are with you! I or 'i' Captain! lol That's a Joke by the way. Grinning at you, loving the title so so much.

Very powerful and profound. You felt this one to your very soul. Sandra

Wow that is a cool poem...I couldn't agree more.

Love the title. Splendid read Patricia