Thursday, July 25, 2013

Battle To Be Won! Comments

Rating: 5.0

I am on way to fight a long battle!

My Mind is a battle field.
Where...
...
Read full text

Geetha Jayakumar
COMMENTS
Kumarmani Mahakul 12 July 2018

Mind is battle field where good thoughts and bad thoughts are fighting. On the one side love, peace; confidence and happiness and on the other side there are gloominess; hatred; anger; sorrow and hatred. The last stanza expresses.... Winner if I am... I will wear a crown of love in my heart I will host a Flag of happiness in my mind. My voice will sing a song of peace! A brilliant poem amazingly shared.10

0 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 06 August 2016

As far as thoughts are concerned both the Hindi version and English version are the great poems. I know Hindi is not your mother tongue but you have full control on English language. That is why you are amazing in presenting your thoughts in this poem. On the other hand a Hindi reader understands you more as Hindi immediately touches his heart.

0 0 Reply
David Wood 26 July 2013

I like it, A good poem, we all have to cope with all that life throws at us and keep a happy frame of mind.

0 0 Reply
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 July 2013

This battle always goes on inside everyone. Let good win. I read your Hindi original also. Your translation retained all the essence and beauty. Thank you.

0 0 Reply
Geetha Jayakumar

Geetha Jayakumar

Kerala Palakkad
Close
Error Success