Battle Through The Tides Comments

Very much heart felt, it reveals the beautiful heart you have in you thinking for others and always feel to help other. So nice of you Lyn, love you. Thanks for your caring heart.

... sometimes love is not enough for the person... I like the note you have written.. ~ two sides.. two hearts only one hurting~ That makes it even worse.... wonderful write...

This is a very powerful poem and it reveals the ignorance of a lot of people. The absence of empathy and kindness.

The real hurt and real sadness in your poem have the flavour of Keats' Endymion: To Sorrow I bade good morrow, And thought to leave her far away behind; But cheerly, cheerly, She loves me dearly; She is so constant to me, and so kind: I would deceive her And so leave her, But ah! she is so constant and so kind.

Powerful poem Lyn. X

Feel the poem with it struggle in the battle....Its hard to let Black to meet White, just find a similarity and fuse the identity to know, may Grey will be a junction of two side..._Soul

a forceful write when feeling is involved

Written and experienced and felt, .great writing Lyn.

we all need love we all feel pain. very touching

Your pain is expressed in such a manner as you can't bear it but you have to.This is the tragedy of commoners. Very beautifully and casually accepted.Bravo!

I can feel your pain through your poem Lyn. Time is the great healer and keeping busy helps and also your friends on PH.

Wow, and how well said. love it.

To care and to be cared in turn is the prime longing of all! But unfortunately the world around us is too busy to care for anyone! This lament comes ringing from every human heart! ! A poignant write, Lyn!

We all need to feel that we are cared about, and when we don't then we feel abandoned. But people do care, and often it is from unexpected sources. A touching write Lyn.

Care... Care... Care... Is all that I have shown Yet now I feel... That I am all alone Ring so true! great write, Lyn.

a very beautiful and real write. definite 10/10. :)