Wednesday, September 10, 2008

Battle Scars Comments

Rating: 5.0

'Never again, would I want to feel the hurt
Of feeling so jaded and so lost' I heard you say
I see such fear and honesty in your eyes
I know you have your own share of dissolution
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June FeirCruz
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Kevin Fisher 14 April 2009

the scars from battle may never fade maybe physically but never mentally we are huanted by these scars and will never forget them

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Les Derbyshire 31 March 2009

Conveys those intense feeling beautifully and simply. Thank you June.

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The rabid reality of hurt cause many to say the never word. Many can identify with your poem and it is well written.I really like it.

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Anita Evans 16 September 2008

Wonderful work. Boy have I can relate.

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