Tuesday, September 11, 2007

Battle Scars Comments

Rating: 4.3

I wear them
for I must
upon my flesh
to dust
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Uloia Norris Moore
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Elysabeth Faslund 25 September 2007

There is something so intriging(sic) about how you handle this message, with the word orders you've chosen...it is refreshing! You take a 'could have been trite' subject and turn it into something new with this word order. Now, that's poetry! ! ! Excellent! ! xxElysabeth

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YOU ARE HEAD ABOVE ALL HUMAN SHOULDERS

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Tatianna Rei Moonshadow 11 September 2007

worded well, I think we all have our fair share of battle scars

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