Battle Of The Soul Comments

Hi Aaron, your choice of words used here to paint this great poem is fantastic, good composition and well delivered piece....keep expressing Best of Health & Happiness Jon

Interesting! Great Work! I love some of the word usage!

very emotional, great work, keep up the great work. I will be watching for your poems

This is very well written my friend. Well done.

Without doubt, you are a astonishing writer, very well composed. All the very best Jon

I always love to read the poetry of a young philosopher. It reminds me of myself, when I was young. GW62

I love this poem So intriguing Could you please comment my poems?

You write; 'Two wolves inside your soul, ' hmm, ? If I'm to comment for your poem as an expression of how Aaron feels, then 'Content' would reflect my opinion.Since we can only personally know of ourselves as soulfully 'Human' Then just what would any poet, author, reader know of whether comparatively, 'Wolves' exist within, even as a likened metaphor? Much too upsetting for myself to be compared to an animal.. So i am more of the opinion as to the manner of which your words describe your own feelings, setting aside any of the writers assumption that all readers have such conflict within, however, there is always, 'Without' It just so happens, that 'Wolves', have their biggest problem with humans, for their survival. Being much better off that with the human brain. OK! What with soul, spirit of whatever there be battles, I would rather 'Live with Wolves', than with whatever exists within people that war against people. Your poem is one of creative, self admonition, Your poetic expression, 'Interesting' Thanks for sharing. ...louie

WOW! ! ! I think this is my favorite so far, I find it intriguing to say the least. Everyone truly wants to know the victor... but will we ever?

I like it i know where you are comming from but my understanding is not that good because i am not in your shoes

this is well penned, Aaron!

It was intresting I wanted to read it and that doesnt happen very often So kudos to u!

Hi Aaron! A great poem right verses wrong, good shall prevail this Wolf is strong! ! *10*! ! Keep inking My Friend! Best regards Thad

This is solid poetry, I love the set up and the moral as encapsulated in the final line. Well done, L&T

wow i like this one! the last line expecially! the last line it so true. its like a rythemic story. another great job! ! ! : D Sara<3