Battle Of The Self... Comments

Inner self! ! Looking inside. Thoughts of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

Reading this poem, I was thinking of this ever present duality in our self. We have this ego that tends to be very loud and then we have the soul that should be our guide, but who is speaking to us so extremely softly. I wrote a small poem on that, why is my soul so quiet. I do not have an answer but the battle between soul and ego is something ever interesting and so much food for thought.

Ahhh....I know that floating above feeling so well. As if you are here, but so very detached. Almost a breath could let you go. The self-regeneration idea is vivid and creative, and the struggle with self and ego is an intriguing one to consider. I must agree whole-heartedly with Judy, that your writing is taking on deeper and deeper shades of brilliance. Keep it up! ! :) S