Friday, June 13, 2008

Battle Of Sexes Comments

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In the dawn of my married life,
The lake of life was shining with the bliss,
By the dawn of mid life,
There seems like storm brewing on the horizon.
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Jay P Narain
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compromise on everything seems to be marraige...the last two lines sums up the poem

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Reshma Ramesh 21 November 2008

how true and well said................good write

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Tia Maria 02 November 2008

Thank you for your kind comment on mine, it brought me to read this.... a very important lesson to learn in life. How fragile we are & must handle love wih care 10/10

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Jay P Narain

Jay P Narain

Bihar, India
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