Before the break of dawn each side prepared battle plans
in a bright bonfires burnt til’ sunrise,
Strategy drawn on sand not on a piece of paper,
indigenous warriors rallied about the Datu,
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You have described the battle in a poetic manner Good write Rgds Nooruddeen
A stunning poetic narration of history on our country. well done my friend! ! ! 10+++
History and poetry are well adjoined and versified........10. Regards Naseer
this is an exhilarating piece indeed.. i enjoyed this battle very much! ! ! very visual and felt like a scene from a movie! ! ! 10 with love shan
the poem is a classic of itself....... well descriptive and give the battle in clear picture......... see my 10 +.......
the story on how lapu lapu won the fight, and how magellan discover the philippines......in a fine poetry, this is nicely penned...grace
Great and classic narrative poem...the history relive by your write the discovery of Philippines by the group of Magellan and to his defeat by the native Lapu - Lapu...well done....10
Excellent story poem Noel..., I loved it. Keep up the fine work.....! ! ! ! Best regards, Trade.
an excellent poem with a powerful poetic way to be able to describe that battle, , loved that image before the dawn, and i was able to hear and to see the swords and all the images were so vivid, , very well done
highly informative and educational. story of the brave. voted10 surya
a great narrative and detailed info.You will make a great historian..