Sunday, October 26, 2008

Battle Of Consciousness Comments

Rating: ★5.0

Taking the mind about them
Lost in their way of use
Their only path forward is the one they will lose
Now lost in another river of booze
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Drake Kinkaid
lost river
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Sarwar Chowdhury 09 November 2008

fine thought out.....penned beautifully! .....10+

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*Trusting You* 02 November 2008

I like the end to this one. and the lines Their only path forward is the one they will lose Now lost in another river of booze good job. *Purkey Girl*

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Sheetal V 26 October 2008

well said but by 'boose'... do you mean boos or booze...? ?

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