Battle In My Mind Comments

The poem was really good. The meaning it gave and they way when i read it the words fell together proudly. It gave me shivers, i must say.

My mind is going in circles, like that of a revolving door...........wonderful depiction of heart and soul on the rune of passion, yet both are jusxtaposed while doing good, mind is scalar where heart is a vector in the plexus of dynamics, heart still restrains the mind in doing wrong, yet it guards trudging the path, eloquently narrated yet ingenious,10+, thanks for sharing

Life is so difficult that it is very easy to get confused and battle good and evil. God in your heart is a big part of going in the right direction, in my mind. Good luck and God bless! Great poem, a '10! ' for sure. Warm Wishes, Marilyn