Battle Comments

Perfect poem. Enjoyed.Full Applause.

Concluding two lines are significant dear poet.

your word choice was spot on--top marks--I'd write more but PH doesn't seem to be working so you'll probably never see my thoughts ---how long has PH been down?

An astoundingly different and astonishing poem. The battle between the elements and poetic creation under stress and adverse circumstances and sweltering heat. And yet, talent wins. Your poem is so attractive, original and beats the heat. Thank you for this red hot feat!

Yeah that is true; No one can displace the other. Beautifully penned as always. Thanks.

Enjoy this poem very much Bravo! ! ! !

..... neither can displace the other..... magnificent.....

Silence and words are perpetually in conflict, yet neither can replace the other. This struggle is highly captivating and compelling, particularly the manner in which you have woven it in your verse. Full *****