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A sweet nostalgic write about the pros and cons of advancing technology. Maybe you could have the old girl repaired so you can still hear her heart beat. I know that's what I'd to. lovely poem. Allie xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I feel so sorry for its old ticker! ! ! ! No heart, such a shame. You brought him to life in this poem. Wonderful read. Love Ernestine XXX

Sweet, simple, touching and wonderfully crafted.

Dear Sylvia, I love this one as it reminds me of a time when we knew how to treasure the things that had meaning in our lives.Even a simple clock can touch the heart.This poem has had a simular effect.Great write.Love Duncan

I just know that you have been in your Grandmother's attic again, haven't you. If you never do a thing with this clock, don't throw it out, because poets are always one step out of time with everyone else anyhow! ! Scarlett

You can always tell a poem is great when you read it and you have finished it very quickly. This poem has an excellent flow! Another winner Sylvia! A ten.

I liked this poem, I thought it was well constructed. Gary