Battered Wife Comments

he lowered his hand in dismay she knew then-she could not stay. the following day she packed her things and on the dresser, left her ring....... sordid affairs and not geed end... i like the wordings and imagination.......10 read mine onsame lines'Divorce' &'No separate ways' it may strengthen ur views. pse comment

great message.............well done

a very relevant poem......vvery good....10

I am amazed at how well you handled this difficult subject matter while preserving the artistic integrity of it, great poem!

I loved the peacefulness in this poem very nice write Krista

that was a nice piece with a message

great write.. i know a lot of young girls that need to hear this

she shoudf have showed sword why knife.......Good Write.........

Nice sentiments with good message.

You understand the woman side to this trauma so well, I'm only guessing you have sat somewhere hidden or heard many stories to this kind of abuse. A great, great poem, written so well. Thankyou for sharing Louis. 10++++