Battered And Bruised Comments

'battered and bruised, Tossed away, so often used, ' Are the the shocker? Are you the stunner? ah, cripes! what a mourning elegy is this! My dad said we cannot express our love in words when I was too young. But now you are proving hi wrong by expressing your profound grief! Hey H for Holy is the rating i give to your poem. c for crimson, L for love, b and L for best of luck! :) :)

powerful, riveting and gripping this moved me, it stirred something within me Thank you