Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Bathtime Bliss. Comments

Rating: 5.0

On hearing the sound of warm water flushing
The scents of the Orient into my bath,
I fill with elation, my cheeks begin blushing
With anticipation. - My Bathtime is back!
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Fay Slimm
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Carl Harris 07 April 2009

Women do love their bubble baths, Fay, and no male with a brain would be stupid enough to begrudge them that wonderfuly re-invigorating pleasure. After all, many a male has learned that his love's fascination with long, leisurely hot bath often proves quite beneficial to him afterwards! One thing men enjoy is showering together with a lover and playing that wonderfully inspiring game of soaping up each other all over. That little game has led to many pleasures! But I am drifting from the point of your lovely poem-how delightful it is to get away from it all for an hour or so, luxuriating in the aromas and bubbles of long and lovely old fashioned bath. What a marvelllous and enchanting poem this is, Fay! Carl.

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James Timothy Jarrett 27 September 2008

Kudos Fay! I love it. One of lifes great pleasures you bring to paper. (Or something like paper)

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Bonnie Collins 27 September 2008

OH this sounds so relaxing, Except I would have Lavender! ! LOL.. Very nice feel and anticipation of how good my bath will feel tonight! ! Excellent! ! Bonnie

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Bob Gibson 22 September 2008

That friday night bath, in four inches of water my wife went in first followed close by our daughter lingering woman, the bath they did hug cold water for dad, but in bed was a hug!

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James B. Earley 21 September 2008

A 'clean' hint of eroticism...lurking.....here....somewhere...methinks! Enticing......

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Dawn Slanker 17 September 2008

You brought tears to my envious eyes. I haven't had a bath in so long. Showers only for me, but I hope to renovate my bathroom soon in which I am going to place a giant 72 inch claw foot tub right under the window where I plan to soak and soak and soak. Oh, how I love baths. This poem is great...wonderful descriptive language throughout. My compliments.

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Tom Balch 16 September 2008

Your not in hot water with this one fay, great soak, I mean write.10 Tom

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David Threadgold 16 September 2008

Hi Fay. Theres nothing like a nice hot bath and when you can have one in rhyme so much the better. another great read. **10** Regards Dave T.

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Ency Bearis 16 September 2008

how refreshing thereafter..and inviting...for the TLC (tender loving care) and caresses..there will be...nice tempting write... Ency Bearis

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Marvin Brato 16 September 2008

Truly its a bliss especially when you share the bath with a loved one. A 10.

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Kris Smith 16 September 2008

Brilliant Fay can't beat a good old soak inthe tub, showers are only fun if theres two 10 Chris x

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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