R-ays above bathe your heart,
O-ctober eleventh morn;
N-ew dawn has just broken
A-t the day when you were born.
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Acrostic song Is difficult to write. But the poet has chosen the birth day to write it with ease. Excellent.
A radiantly lovely birthday tribute, Bernard. A joy to read.
Warm words embalming the heart of the reader! Sweet and lovely!
R-adiant glows that shine A-re making a fresh fine start; N-either dusk nor twilight, A-llow the sun to bathe Y-our heart.........touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem.10
beautiful acrostic poem- L-et the beacon bathe your heart, Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too; N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.///
A great acrostic my friend! I admire your sparkling poetic expression.....................10
A beautiful acrostic poem... I liked the write-up.. Thanks for the poem being shared... pc
We are not meant to stay in dusk's dim light! We are to stay in broad daylight... bright and luminous. That light comes from above! A beautiful Birthday wish in acrostic style and an inspiring write! A sure 10
Thanks, dear Ma’am Valsa for the heartwarming and inspiring words🙏🙏
Dear Sir Bernard, Rays above bathe your heart It says remain in God's love Sincerely, Diane
I love to read your acrostic poetry Bernard, so beautifully written.
beautifully written L-et the (divine) beacon bathe your heart,
Exceptional piece of work, dear Bernie. Keep it up......................
R-adiant glows that shine A-re making a fresh fine start; N-either dusk nor twilight, A-llow the sun to bathe Y-our heart. A marvelous acrostic, dear Bernie.............................
R-ays above bathe your heart, O-ctober eleventh morn; N-ew dawn has just broken A-t the day when you were born. L-et the beacon bathe your heart, Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too; N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue. This is truly amazing, dear Bernard.......................
Such a beautiful composition! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece!