Tuesday, October 11, 2016

Bathe Your Heart Comments

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R-ays above bathe your heart,
O-ctober eleventh morn;
N-ew dawn has just broken
A-t the day when you were born.
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Bernard F. Asuncion
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Dr Dillip K Swain 12 December 2020

Such a beautiful composition! My great pleasure revisiting this wonderful piece!

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Rajendran Muthiah 17 April 2020

Acrostic song Is difficult to write. But the poet has chosen the birth day to write it with ease. Excellent.

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Evelyn Judy Buehler 31 March 2020

A radiantly lovely birthday tribute, Bernard. A joy to read.

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Mihaela Pirjol 26 November 2019

Warm words embalming the heart of the reader! Sweet and lovely!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 June 2019

R-adiant glows that shine A-re making a fresh fine start; N-either dusk nor twilight, A-llow the sun to bathe Y-our heart.........touching expression with lofty theme. Beautiful poem.10

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Anjandev Roy 29 May 2019

Sublime poem. It pleases my heart. Thank u. anjandev roy.

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Mahtab Bangalee 21 April 2019

beautiful acrostic poem- L-et the beacon bathe your heart, Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too; N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue.///

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Dr Dillip K Swain 20 April 2019

A great acrostic my friend! I admire your sparkling poetic expression.....................10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, Dillip for the priceless feedback🙏🙏

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Pallab Chaudhury 20 March 2019

A beautiful acrostic poem... I liked the write-up.. Thanks for the poem being shared... pc

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, Pallab for the marvelous message 🙏🙏

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Valsa George 16 March 2019

We are not meant to stay in dusk's dim light! We are to stay in broad daylight... bright and luminous. That light comes from above! A beautiful Birthday wish in acrostic style and an inspiring write! A sure 10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, dear Ma’am Valsa for the heartwarming and inspiring words🙏🙏

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Aniruddha Pathak 06 February 2019

Lovely acrostic indeed.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, sir Aniruddha for the precious comment 🙏🙏

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Richard D Remler 26 January 2019

an uplifting write, much enjoyed. A fun read.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, Richard for the warm words of inspiration 🙏🙏

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Diane Montemayor 20 January 2019

Dear Sir Bernard, Rays above bathe your heart It says remain in God's love Sincerely, Diane

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, dear ate Diane for the precise remark🙏🙏

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Jennifer Birchall 15 January 2019

A wonderfully written Acrostic Bernard.

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Jennifer Birchall 15 January 2019

I love to read your acrostic poetry Bernard, so beautifully written.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, dear Ma’am Jenny for the top-of-the-line comment🙏🙏

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Britte Ninad 10 January 2019

beautifully written L-et the (divine) beacon bathe your heart,

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, Britte for the beautiful words🙏🙏

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Cheryl Tutaan 04 January 2019

Exceptional piece of work, dear Bernie. Keep it up......................

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Cheryl Tutaan 03 January 2019

R-adiant glows that shine A-re making a fresh fine start; N-either dusk nor twilight, A-llow the sun to bathe Y-our heart. A marvelous acrostic, dear Bernie.............................

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Cheryl Tutaan 01 January 2019

R-ays above bathe your heart, O-ctober eleventh morn; N-ew dawn has just broken A-t the day when you were born. L-et the beacon bathe your heart, Y-our mind, soul, and spirit too; N-ight chill has disappeared into the dark, gray and blue. This is truly amazing, dear Bernard.......................

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Bernard F. Asuncion 20 April 2019

Thanks, dear Cheryl for the lovely message🙏🙏

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Cheryl Tutaan 31 December 2018

A well penned masterpiece, Bernard❤️❤️❤️

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