Having a bath is so relaxing,
When a day at the office has been so taxing,
We need to ease away our tensions,
Otherwise we may never collect our pensions,
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I wouldn't have thought it would be possible to write a poem about having a bath but you have proved me wrong! Great write Ernestine, Love Andrew x
Nice one! It makes me feel like running a hot bath right now and jumping in :)
Dear Ernestine, a nice relaxing bath, nothing quite like it.Our shower is broken at the moment and I'm not at all worried.Loads of bubbles and candles, Love Duncan
ha ha I liked this, sums it all up really, baths can just take you away from all the stresses of the day, kind of like a good poem can: -)
Who was it said that no-one can feel angry in a hot bath? Probably Robin Skelton?
I wholeheartedly share your love for baths Ernestine. I keep paper and pen close by because this one of my rare 'quiet times' where I can let inspiration hit me for new poems. Nice. Sincerely, Mary
What a great explanatory poem about why we should have a bath. You had no need to convince me though, as it is my favorite place. That is your talent, to take something simple as this, and give the reader the chance to do likewise and take a bath. 10 Karin Anderson